“Write about a recent time when someone helped you.”
I live alone so my father calls me call to wake up me in the morning almost every.
On the other day, I 寝坊しそうになったが父が電話をしてくれたおかげで I was not late.
I really 感謝を感じた。
I think I should be abele to wake up alone everyday.
とても伝わる内容です。少し文法と自然な表現を直すと、次のようになります。
I live alone, so my father calls me every morning to wake me up.
The other day, I almost overslept, but thanks to his phone call, I wasn’t late.
I was really grateful for his help.
I think I should be able to wake up by myself every day.
修正ポイント
- calls me call → calls me
- to wake up me → to wake me up
- 「wake + 人 + up」の語順です。
- almost every → almost every morning
- On the other day → The other day
- 「先日」は the other day が自然です。
- 寝坊しそうになった
- I almost overslept. が一番自然です。
- 父が電話をしてくれたおかげで
- thanks to his phone call
- 感謝を感じた
- I was really grateful for his help.（自然な表現）
- be able to wake up alone
- be able to wake up by myself の方が自然です。
TSST・英会話向けの少し良いバージョン
I live alone, so my father calls me every morning to wake me up. The other day, I almost overslept, but thanks to his phone call, I wasn’t late for work. I was really grateful because he helped me a lot. However, I think I should be able to wake up by myself every day.
“I was really grateful.” や “Thanks to…” はTSSTでも非常によく使える表現なので、ぜひ覚えておくと役立ちます。
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