とても良いです!今回は内容も構成もTSST向きです。
あなたの回答
I prefer exercising alone because I can concentrate better. I also, I also can exercise at my own pace. For example…
自然な英語
I prefer exercising alone because I can concentrate better. I can also exercise at my own pace. For example, when I exercise with other people, I sometimes get distracted. That’s why I prefer exercising alone.
TSSTレベル6らしい言い換え
I prefer exercising alone because I can concentrate better. I can also exercise at my own pace without worrying about other people. For example, when I work out with friends, we sometimes spend more time talking than exercising. That’s why I prefer exercising alone.
良かった点
✅ 理由が2つある
- I can concentrate better.
- I can exercise at my own pace.
これはTSSTで高評価につながる構成です。
改善点
「For example…」の後は、具体的な自分の経験を1文入れる癖をつけましょう。
例えば、
- When I exercise with my friends, we often chat instead of exercising.
- I don’t have to wait for anyone.
- I can choose the exercises I like.
- I can finish my workout more quickly.
このような短い例で十分です。

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